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[Viva La Animutation v2]

much better

It would be awesome if there would be a loader screen. i hate playing chicken with internet explorer. but yea, asweome. but still, what is the name of that music..that is cool. also, did you have to put the picture of that real old woman in there? cause that was just gross...*shudders*

Frankiedaman responds:

the music is called "Fred come to Bed" by E-Rotic

[Captain Planet Snaps]

nicely done

I used to watch this as a kid. I could have stood it to be a big longer though. i did laugh from start to finnish. but yea, longer is better! lol...no comment on that one.

NG-Dark-Lord responds:

I just wanted the animation to last the length of the theme song...if you can get me a Captain Planet theme song that goes for a few more minutes I would be happy to make this animation a little longer for ya..."bucko"

[!!!JUMP AROUND!!! VII]

it could be better

I like the music and all but here are some ways you cna improve.
1. Do more than jsut that one action. the dancing is cool, but it gets old real fast. you might want to cut to some scence or seomthgin, a bt more like a music video. try and see if you can tell a story with it, that is always fun. (and if you try to tella stroy, see if you can make it match the music)
2. do nto cut the music off 1/2 through the song. i kinda wanted to hear the rest of it. but it wa snto so much the cutting of fthat annoyed me as it was the fact that you started playing the next verse then it repeated.
3. you might want to add some humor in it. humor is always great. but if you were nto goign for that, then do nto worry about it...but humor is always a great and welcomed addition (unless you are doign a drama, then it is campy)
i hope this helped