it could be better
I like the music and all but here are some ways you cna improve.
1. Do more than jsut that one action. the dancing is cool, but it gets old real fast. you might want to cut to some scence or seomthgin, a bt more like a music video. try and see if you can tell a story with it, that is always fun. (and if you try to tella stroy, see if you can make it match the music)
2. do nto cut the music off 1/2 through the song. i kinda wanted to hear the rest of it. but it wa snto so much the cutting of fthat annoyed me as it was the fact that you started playing the next verse then it repeated.
3. you might want to add some humor in it. humor is always great. but if you were nto goign for that, then do nto worry about it...but humor is always a great and welcomed addition (unless you are doign a drama, then it is campy)
i hope this helped